With Bare Hands Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

With Bare Hands



With bare hands

Heart sings well
And unwillingly tell
About the sufferings felt
And no fragrance smelt

This is tragedy
For the mankind made by an almighty
He had given clear direction
For building harmonious relation

It was to be our goal
And respond to divine call
Leave behind everything
And bring along nothing

But we rushed towards material happiness
And brought unwanted tresses
We forgot basic things
Nothing was to accompany with dead bodies

The hands were to remain open
For onward journey to heaven
The principles clearly indicated
The outcome of our deeds was to be counted

So we wasted human life
And cared nothing about family members and wife
We regarded less for humanity
And finally went bare hands to an almighty

With Bare Hands
Wednesday, November 22, 2017
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 November 2017

So we wasted human life And cared nothing about family members and wife We regarded less for humanity And finally went bare hands to an almighty

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Kevin Patrick 22 November 2017

Well said, the message is true to our times. Great work!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 November 2017

Great mantra for a blessed life. TFS. Jasneet Kaur, Nov 23,2017

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 November 2017

A very good one! The flow is very sweet. Supratik Sen, Nov 23,2017

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 November 2017

Nice poem, Hasmukh ji, on the general greed to amass wealth by people. As you rightly point out, all spiritual gurus have always pointed out the futility of this (at the expense of peace and harmony in one's life) when we have to leave everything behind when we depart. GSP Rao, Nov 23,2017

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 November 2017

Nagasuseela Panchumarthi Hearty thanks and regards Dear poet Hasmukh Mehta ji... For your lovely lines of fine composition. Bare facts of life is projected with Wise words of... Analysis... Like · Reply · 1 · 23 November at 22: 04 Manage

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 November 2017

welcome Nagasuseela Panchumarthi Like Like · Reply · 1 · Just now

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