Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 412,636 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

With Bright Future Too - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

If we had little compassion
We could beautifully build relation
Worried over nothing for no possession
Brushing it aside as simple obsession

Life is not useless
But full of struggle to face
Life is to rear children
And look after parents even

So something has to be earned
With not lot more concern
But watching at each turn
Without making fingers burn

Inward happiness
Not make you helpless
But pulls toward
With successful words

So we rejoice
And promise
With failure
And with bright future too

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/5/2015 4:50:00 PM)


    Scott Ransopher and Positive Window like this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/5/2015 4:49:00 PM)


    xa well captured perspective!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/5/2015 4:48:00 PM)


    Scott Ransopher and Positive Window like this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (3/5/2015 9:10:00 AM)


    Life is not useless
    But full of struggle to face
    Life is to rear children
    And look after parents even.......It is true always. We must rear children as well as look after parents. It is a good message to society. Very nicely composed. Many thanks Amathalal sir.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/5/2015 6:56:00 AM)


    If we had little compassion
    We could beautifully build relation
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 5, 2015



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