With Change Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

With Change

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With change
It can be managed
Day and night
Can bring delight

Stars do help to guide
Ships on the sea route can find
Glide the route and have direction
Seek the way and reach the destination

Poor and rich
Both are easy to reach
Poor with will power to reach
And rich with zeal to catch

So in adverse style
Weather can stay for a while
Sky way may clear
With no more fear

So be it
Day or night
We can move
And certainly prove

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ronnie Rayner Larter 23 January 2014

This is a nice little free form poem, but I felt in the third stanza using the word 'reach' twice in succession as an end of line rhyme spoils it for me. Other than than that you have a natural ability for rhyme. Well done.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 January 2014

Rohani Daud likes this. Rohani Daud Beautiful poem..love it.. 7 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 January 2014

E.J Marshall1 minute ago just seemed like you were trying too hard to rhyme Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago it comes easy way to me.. no hard or soft. it is my way

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 January 2014

With change It can be managed

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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