With comments
My love smiles
In a style
Variant with time
I miss it more sometimes
It is her habit
To greet
With mild attack
And gently stake
Such a good character
But she is not an actor
She is good mother and lover
What can I offer?
Life is like vast field
Where different positions are held
Everybody moves in orderly manner
To remain as good lover, bad teaser
I shall prefer to be different
With more prone to an attachment
Take every chance to present
And lively send with comments
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Beautiful poem presenting one's approach towards relations and emotions. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
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This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I shall prefer to be different With more prone to an attachment Take every chance to present And lively send with comments