Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 385,581 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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My love smiles
In a style
Variant with time
I miss it more sometimes

It is her habit
To greet
With mild attack
And gently stake

Such a good character
But she is not an actor
She is good mother and lover
What can I offer?

Life is like vast field
Where different positions are held
Everybody moves in orderly manner
To remain as good lover, bad teaser

I shall prefer to be different
With more prone to an attachment
Take every chance to present
And lively send with comments

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/25/2015 1:50:00 AM)


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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/25/2015 1:46:00 AM)


    welcome udi Satyavenkatavinodkumar and Poetry Land like this.
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  • (11/24/2015 11:08:00 PM)


    Beautiful poem presenting one's approach towards relations and emotions. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points. (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/24/2015 9:15:00 PM)


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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/24/2015 9:15:00 PM)


    Alexandra Rodrigues thank you for the poetic comment to y write. Unlike · Reply · 1 · 2 hrs
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/24/2015 7:15:00 PM)


    I shall prefer to be different
    With more prone to an attachment
    Take every chance to present
    And lively send with comments
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 24, 2015



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