Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 398,644 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

With Lovely Song - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

With lovely song

I had waited for long
with lovely song
the anxiety was not to be told
as it was my real world

I had waited for long
With lovely song
The anxiety was not to be told
As it was my real world

As I heard about his home coming
My feet were simply dancing
I was dreaming in day time
With losing of concentration sometime

Unknown happiness struck to mind
And I was becoming blind
In love to meet him eagerly
And whisper in ears gently

I was in real mood
I do not know “what did I understood”
But it was him only
To have made love dearly

He shall come near
And I shall greet him sans fear
How should I express my joy?
It is matter for self to enjoy

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/6/2015 6:25:00 PM)


    I loved it... TFS
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  • Shakil Ahmed (12/6/2015 9:18:00 AM)


    He shall come near
    And I shall greet him sans fear
    How should I express my joy?
    It is matter for self to enjoy - beautiful ending, ending of your poems are always very nice, thanks
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/6/2015 8:29:00 AM)


    welcome Josef Schwabl likes this.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/6/2015 8:25:00 AM)


    He shall come near
    And I shall greet him sans fear
    How should I express my joy?
    It is matter for self to enjoy
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 6, 2015

Poem Edited: Sunday, December 6, 2015


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