With Thoughts Of Feeling Insignificant Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

With Thoughts Of Feeling Insignificant

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So many today sit,
With thoughts of feeling insignificant.
And for those who sit,
With thoughts like this...
Seek and usually get their validation.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ace Of Black Hearts 26 September 2011

That kind of validation should be but the silence among the lambs. A quietness to never be heard. A whisper that wants to be a scream but doesn't exactly know how. As if to say I have a question, yet I'm to afraid to ask. A game of self pity. Beckoning for attention. As if our fault of that which they did not mention. A homeless man walking on the poorest streets of the city. A prostitute getting in the car with another jon in a place known for such vices. We have to take notice and We have to stand out to be noticed. And pessimism does nothing to farther such a cause. Unless that is what one desires. Again thanks for another great poem, your fan John..

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