Aabid Masroor

Veteran Poet - 1,720 Points (21/06/1992 / Kashmir)

With You - Poem by Aabid Masroor

So this is who I am
I carry you with me
So this is who I was
Went mute, broken for no cause

With you my land was free
As vast as ocean by
Where no harm could befall
Where flowers and mighty river fall

With you my days were bright
Cool breeze, blossom bloom and golden sights
Shielded by mountain from every side
As mother embrace, cuddle her child

With you _Oh my poem, the moist breeze of ideas
Had left me all about you
Took me high as stars above
Filled my heart with lust and love

With you when flowers smelled
The soft breeze would pass by
Spring has come again with arise
My days are paradise

With you I was a complete man
Would differentiate loss and gain
Without you I die and cry
Please don't say good bye
Please don't say good bye…

Topic(s) of this poem: you

Comments about With You by Aabid Masroor

  • Chinedu Dike (2/12/2018 8:16:00 PM)

    Passionate rendition from the heart nicely embellished in poetic rhyme with conviction. Very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing Aabid. (Report) Reply

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  • (2/22/2016 8:46:00 AM)

    Sad, heart wrenching poem, all is beautiful when your love is with you, without it your entire world dies. A heartfelt plea to love not to say goodbye. Touched my heart, Aabid. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 31, 2016

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