With You, Without You

Rating: 5.0

You gave me hope the day we met
Yet hope was lost the day I let
That touch from you slip from my reach
And only now I truly see
Just how much you meant to me

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Sarah Shahzad 11 January 2020

lovely wrote & you choice words cleverly & used them..! thanks 4 sharing :)

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Ramesh Rai 03 October 2013

short n emotional write.loved your ink

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Dipy Hermonite 03 October 2013

Wow. So much emotion packed in. Loved it. Have rated your poem. Could I request you to read and rate my poem? I would also be delighted if you could endorse your comments on the poem. Link is given below http: //www.poemhunter.com/contest-vote/your-world-my-lord/ Regards Dipy

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Sina Farajzadeh 09 August 2013

Hi. This poem is realy tuchy. It's short but really full of emotions and feelings. thanks for sharing.

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