Allen Steble

Rookie - 110 Points (20/04/1987)

Within A Diamond - Poem by Allen Steble

On the outside i am strong
My very skin shines with many pearls
I feel trapped in my self though
not able to escape, caged up in confusion
I feel almost a part of my surrounds
one with an inanimate object, a precious one
I hope somebody will find the precious stone in which i dwell
Because I am a burning flame on the inside
and that makes me sparkle, my own pain
I am trapped, trapped within a diamond

Comments about Within A Diamond by Allen Steble

  • (10/5/2014 10:40:00 AM)

    Lively description of the two faces everyone is forced to have. Enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

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  • Mike Barrett (12/13/2013 3:56:00 PM)

    Once one understands himself/herself as Soul, a particle of consciousness of the IT IS (God) diamonds pale in comparison. Check out my poem Drift Up, one line in there says,
    Rise early one morning and catch a sunrise
    Or maybe find diamonds in dew.

    I enjoy your work! Ciao.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 30, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, March 4, 2011

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