Within Your Eyes Poem by Scarlet .....

Within Your Eyes

Rating: 5.0


The comfort and care
of a parent
is what I should see
within your eyes
but instead
it is only hate and rage
that dwells in your gaze
both are glaring at me
is it I who made you eyes change
what is it that I did
for you lost the comfort and care look
when I was born
is it that
is it that I was born
did I ruin your life
was I the one who made you hate
made your eyes be filled with rage
that is the only reason I see
am I blind to the real reason
or is it true
for I see your eyes soften
once you look away from me
but as soon as your gaze falls unto me
your eyes flare with anger and hate
I can see you mind fill with rage
what is it I have done
please tell me so I can fix it
for I would give anything
for you to look at me even just once
with your eyes filled with comfort and care
with the look of a loving parent
please tell me
so I can try to fix it
I will try with all my might
but I can not fix something
when I do not know what I broke

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Princess Me 02 August 2007

Beautiful indeed..children do not ask to come to this world. They deserve to be loved, wanted and cared for regardless of the circmstances.

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Edna Javelosa 15 June 2007

what a lovely piece..a reflection of a child's longing for a mother's real tender love and care..

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