Monday, February 25, 2008

Without Trace For C.R Clark Comments

Rating: 5.0

The soulless city lies in wait
to capture young ambitious fools
Who think that they can demonstrate
they have no need to obey rules.
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ivor or ivor.e hogg
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Mary Gordley 27 February 2008

Another fine poem here Ivor. I love reading your work.

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C.R. Clark 25 February 2008

Ivor, this is a wonderful description of life's pitfalls experienced by so many today. Lucky indeed are the ones who see their errors in time. I am truly honored by the dedication. Thank you Richard

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Thad Wilk 25 February 2008

A wonderful write Ivor! ! I'm sure Richard will love this poem you dedicated! ! *10*! ! Best regards , Friend Thad

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John Thorkild Ellison 25 February 2008

I like this because it addresses modern problems without being trite. A good poem. Best wishes

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