The soulless city lies in wait
to capture young ambitious fools
Who think that they can demonstrate
they have no need to obey rules.
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Ivor, this is a wonderful description of life's pitfalls experienced by so many today. Lucky indeed are the ones who see their errors in time. I am truly honored by the dedication. Thank you Richard
A wonderful write Ivor! ! I'm sure Richard will love this poem you dedicated! ! *10*! ! Best regards , Friend Thad
I like this because it addresses modern problems without being trite. A good poem. Best wishes
Another fine poem here Ivor. I love reading your work.