Women Poem by Matloob Bokhari

WOMEN
Yester night, everyone was fast asleep.
The winged air in summer night was still.
No star was blinking in the welkin.
Moon which dazzles was also away.
The sky was wearing a black cloak.
The queen of the night and stars of the sky
Have come from celestial sphere on our planet.
Earth at night was brighter than the day.
Helen, ringed by moon and stars, was sitting
Like a fair sun in the company of a pale pumpkin.
The twinkling stars were singing an echoing song.
Man went on moon, it is not a wonder.
Moon came to kiss a woman is a marvel indeed!

COMMENTS: WOMAN

Dorothy A. Holmes: A beautiful verse...from heart to open page, a poet's love song!
Maggie: Ah, beautiful images here...lovely poetry indeed
RAJ NANDY: Somehow this nice poem reminds me of that famous movie gazal-''Chaudni ka chanad! '' Guru Dutt sings looking at the sleeping beauty Waheda Rehman in the movie! Thanks, -Raj
Sandra Delussu: hey, beautiful soul! You are marvel indeed!
SatyenderParkashAas: beautiful, matchless, euphoric kiss-lively and esteem.
Jewels Enuffmediocrity King: Two thumbs up! Similes and metaphors so eloquently placed together...Captivating and enchanting...
Gail Wolper: A wonderful write! Please write more poetry!
Alma Delacruz Gossman: Such a lovely poem dear Matloob Bokhari...touching all senses with such tactile phrases and vivid metaphors black cloak, pale pumpkin ~ you painted such an amazing picture and the an equally embracing feeling... beautifully crafted
Gaudreault C Marie: made me smile.anyways. beautiful prose dear one.... ican't help but love it; I am addicted to the moon. addicted to your poetry.
Isabelle Black Smith: Heavenly write of the enchanting celestial dance, Matloob.
Laura Grillo Laveglia: This is a poem to delight the sensors! !
Heather Burns: This is a well-versed poem. I like it, and I will be reading it again. Many times, I like to read this poem. This poem has been selected for our Global Poetry Page
Kristine Nicholson: Yes, Matloob, 'a woman is a marvel indeed'! What a lovely vision you have presented!
James Lam Whao: i like the words configurations beautiful it melts my mind...well-done
DeleteDorothy A. Holmes: From heart to printed page...a poet's blissful journey!

Jen Walls: Very sweet and wise and wonderful...your poem Woman! And the 'moon came to kiss a woman is a marvel indeed.' Thanks dear friend for the gift of a poem...your gift is as lovely and large as our dear brilliant moon!
Gary Leikas: Ringed by moon and starsnot a wonder she is honored

Charlie Giardino: lovely

Frances Anna Ayers: Lovely Matloob!

Flora Vasconcelos: Very tender, Matloob. Thank You, my Friend.

Maggie Mae: I just love this one. 'EArth at night, was brighter than the day', that's a gorgeous line!

Frances Anna Ayers: Beautiful romantic moon imagery!

Jann Gail Jones: I'd love to be kissed by the moon

Laura Bailey: A very lovely write!

Aparna Pathak: it's beautiful....

Sand Tucker: I enjoyed the piece and LOVED the ending. Perfect, Matloob.

Laura Grillo Laveglia: Wow, I love this poem Matloob! The read was my pleasure! !

Sandra Delussu: just told you Matloob..marvel indeed! !

Isabelle Black Smith: Heavenly write of the enchanting celestial dance, Matloob.

Laura Grillo Laveglia: This is a poem to delight the sensors! !

indy Holbert: lovely Matloob Bokhari...

Heather Burns: This is a well versed poem. I like it, and I will be reading it again. Many times I like to read this poem. This poem has been selected for our Global Poetry Page

Rosemary Pigot: Wonderful poem/story.

Kennedy Egoke: Great poem.

Ann Carruth Donoghue: my fave so far x

Kristine Nicholson: Yes, Matloob, 'a woman is a marvel indeed'! What a lovely vision you have presented!

Belinda Hutcheson: Beautiful well done and congratulations

Antonia Valaire: This is a beautiful poem indeed.

Frances Anna Ayers: Beautiful as always Matloob!

James Lam Whao: i like the words configurations beautiful it melt my mind...well-done

Jagjit Singh: Beautiful & lovely poem! !