Sitting by the mortal window of
A moving train called life,
One by one I dropped some seeds of emotions
Into invisible holes of wind
With an arising hope that the hands of your heart
Will water them thoughtfully,
And one day people will be able to witness
Another hanging garden of Babylon,
Glowing green in the tender sunshine of our love.
A moving train called life! ! But, with the muse of the rain from mother nature to satisfy all of us. Nice work.
The entire poem is studded with gems like 'seeds of emotions... hands of your heart.... sunshine of our love' and much more which makes it a pleasure to read. May the sunshine of love spread all over.
a wonderful love poem, very passionate, well-composed, thanks for sharing. if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your valuable comments.
Indeed, Love is wonderful experience.......Great imagery and nice poem. TEN ON TEN.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Sich is the effect of love on you. Nice piece.10/10