Wonderful Companion Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Wonderful Companion

Rating: 5.0


When calm prevails
Peaceful effort fails
Lot many thoughts invade silently
Whole chain of thoughts end abruptly

Day passes without problem
As it is full of struggle then
Noon makes you sweat more
There is lot more to explore

Evening has to be pleasant
As it has toiled you hard for the wants
But the nights become scary
It is flooded with all kinds of worry

Why it happened?
What was needed?
Somehow or rather it crops in mind
We are awakened whole night to find

It is idle mind
That is very kind
Poor chamber is pressed into service
To keep up next day’s promise

It is neither love affair
Nor for any new fair
It is simple matter
But that makes you to wonder

So calm and so peaceful
Yet they are dreadful
Any attempts at peace becomes unsuccessful
As night is really day’s wonderful companion

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 September 2013

Review Ernest Robles7 minutes ago I like the flow and the choice of words...it is simple but conveys a very powerful message of life and struggle and (I hope) to the reader a sense of moving forward to prevail.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 September 2013

When calm prevails Peaceful effort fails

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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