Sunday, November 1, 2015

Wondering If You're Okay Comments

Rating: 5.0

awakened by chirping green
at dawn of feast dreaming
from far away lone voicing
a new life wishes to begin
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Manonton Dalan
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Ratnakar Mandlik 01 November 2015

Wonderful love poem with a quite blissful flow of emotions. Manonton, I enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Simone Inez Harriman 01 November 2015

Lovely images. Serene poem with a touch of magic. Much enjoyed, Manontio. Thank you

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

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