Wondering If You're Okay Poem by Manonton Dalan

Wondering If You're Okay

Rating: 5.0


awakened by chirping green
at dawn of feast dreaming
from far away lone voicing
a new life wishes to begin
interrupted; creek on floor
somebody could be listening

mind full of wonders anew
a look at calming window
only leaves waving; shadow
a light so erect; a statue
I stand there watching you
until heaven, sky turn blue

Sunday, November 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 01 November 2015

Wonderful love poem with a quite blissful flow of emotions. Manonton, I enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Simone Inez Harriman 01 November 2015

Lovely images. Serene poem with a touch of magic. Much enjoyed, Manontio. Thank you

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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