Manonton Dalan

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Wondering If You're Okay - Poem by Manonton Dalan

awakened by chirping green
at dawn of feast dreaming
from far away lone voicing
a new life wishes to begin
interrupted; creek on floor
somebody could be listening

mind full of wonders anew
a look at calming window
only leaves waving; shadow
a light so erect; a statue
I stand there watching you
until heaven, sky turn blue

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Wondering If You're Okay by Manonton Dalan

  • (11/1/2015 1:58:00 AM)


    Wonderful love poem with a quite blissful flow of emotions. Manonton, I enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points. (Report) Reply

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  • Simone Inez Harriman (11/1/2015 1:21:00 AM)


    Lovely images. Serene poem with a touch of magic. Much enjoyed, Manontio. Thank you (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 1, 2015



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