Why have I been deserted? when others herd together
Why do I have to stand naked under scorching sun? alone?
Why have I faced the coldest storm that needle my skin to blue?
Why does a deluge leave me drenched and storm put me off my feet
Why tears from my eyes get dry all by itself....
Why my hands assure me when I want consolation
Why my feet hold me to ground and never let me fall
Why my will still tie me to mother earth
My soul is one with its people..with you...
Wondering why have you not kept your promise ever
Wondering why have you not stood like a rock
Why have you not opened your arms to welcome any pain that headed my way
and why still never logged horns with trouble that came..
Why have you not took me with from barren land to Elysium
Why have not enveloped me in your arms when winds were mighty and cold?
Why your shoulders were never there when i wanted to cry
Why tears fall? why have I cried?
but tears get dry all by itself....
and my hands assure me
feet hold me to ground and never let me fall
And I am still tied to mother earth
because my soul is one with its people....
My soul is one with...you
this is a wonderful world! we live in wonders! and your compostion is wonderful! very touchy! 10+
a very deep seeded poem...the closing lines are brilliant...very true the soul is left with you to take care of you.....10
strength of soul is an assurance in life. a good poem starting with 'why'.the concluding para is very good. voted10 surya
Why my hands assure me when I want consolation Why my feet hold me to ground and never let me fall Why my will still tie me to mother earth My soul is one with its people..with you... your repeated why has no answers but yes there are many answers if we do think of reality and observe wahts in fornt of your eyes...reality is yourmain theme and how you write is hearfelt and soul touching..very sweet and great idea..meaningful and professionally written..liked it very much 10/10
WOOOW IT'S A GREAT POEM. I DEDICATE THIS FOR YOUR POETIC QUALITY; YOU WEAVE WONDER OF WONDERS I READ THE POEM WITH JOY, I AM YOUR ADMIRER OF ADMIRERS WITH MY HEART, I ENJOY.
Some questions are better left unanswered. A beautiful write.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A genuine cry for the mother Earth and the atricities committed on its people. Penned with love for Nature and great human touch. CP