Sunday, September 18, 2022

Word Surgeon Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a pink cloud of pain
Blood does rain
As it falls to the earth
And returns again
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soren Barrett
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Bri Edwards 19 September 2022

'bruatality' spelling typo : ) MAYBE the poet would make a better poem if not concentrating as much on rhyming. Sometimes some poems don't 'work' for me.

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UNNIKRISHNAN Sivasankara Menon 18 September 2022

Good poem, what a word-surgeon -" living thoughts cannibalised."…

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 September 2022

excellent write top ******

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