The mind itself can’t enjoy alone
Clamors to share it with others
Words build the bridges over souls
Paper birds with the message cajole
Eternity, through our minds’ prism,
Reflects into Nature its myriad hues
The sunset offsets its glamour glare
From heart the beautiful poetry flows.
Though the paper birds now fly bit slow
Messages are soothing as flakes of snow
*Inspired by Ms. Sandra Fowler’s poem ‘Paper Birds’.
a lovely poem on a beautiful poem....very well done sir...these bridges are everlasting
words build bridges over soul........> true! fine phrasology! 10+
ok, , , words build bridges but brains hold the words...so nice ur poem dear...
I am privileged to know that 'Paper Birds' has inspired such a beautiful poem. Your last lines are exceptional. I wish I had written them. Take care. Always your friend at poemhunter, Sandra
I agree with Sandra F the last 2 lines are beautiful....and you're not the only one inspired by her beautiful poem....do read my own titled 'Paper Birds'
A poem certainly from the heart of a life of building bridges with words of wisdom and this poem has just that...soothing like a flake of snow++10 regards
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
As you did in a comment on one of my poems you do again, wonderfully, here. What a pleasure to read this beautiful work that flows on from Sandra's grand piece. Two marvelous wordsmiths, at thier best, complimenting each other using words on the wings of paper birds to bridge the miles between them.----10