Words Build Bridges Poem by C. P. Sharma

Words Build Bridges

Rating: 4.6


The mind itself can’t enjoy alone
Clamors to share it with others
Words build the bridges over souls
Paper birds with the message cajole

Eternity, through our minds’ prism,
Reflects into Nature its myriad hues
The sunset offsets its glamour glare
From heart the beautiful poetry flows.

Though the paper birds now fly bit slow
Messages are soothing as flakes of snow

*Inspired by Ms. Sandra Fowler’s poem ‘Paper Birds’.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patrick A. Martin 09 October 2009

As you did in a comment on one of my poems you do again, wonderfully, here. What a pleasure to read this beautiful work that flows on from Sandra's grand piece. Two marvelous wordsmiths, at thier best, complimenting each other using words on the wings of paper birds to bridge the miles between them.----10

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 06 October 2009

a lovely poem on a beautiful poem....very well done sir...these bridges are everlasting

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Sarwar Chowdhury 06 October 2009

words build bridges over soul........> true! fine phrasology! 10+

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Lady Grace 05 October 2009

ok, , , words build bridges but brains hold the words...so nice ur poem dear...

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Sandra Fowler 05 October 2009

I am privileged to know that 'Paper Birds' has inspired such a beautiful poem. Your last lines are exceptional. I wish I had written them. Take care. Always your friend at poemhunter, Sandra

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Deodath Debideen 18 October 2009

Atma is supreme! No bridges over it...only deception!

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 13 October 2009

a well composed and crafted piece of work

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Sonya Florentino 11 October 2009

I agree with Sandra F the last 2 lines are beautiful....and you're not the only one inspired by her beautiful poem....do read my own titled 'Paper Birds'

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Ken E Hall 11 October 2009

A poem certainly from the heart of a life of building bridges with words of wisdom and this poem has just that...soothing like a flake of snow++10 regards

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Rachel Butler 10 October 2009

Eternity, through our minds’ prism Rachel Ann Butler

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C. P. Sharma

C. P. Sharma

Bissau, Rajasthan
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