The mind itself can’t enjoy alone
Clamors to share it with others
Words build the bridges over souls
Paper birds with the message cajole
Eternity, through our minds’ prism,
Reflects into Nature its myriad hues
The sunset offsets its glamour glare
From heart the beautiful poetry flows.
Though the paper birds now fly bit slow
Messages are soothing as flakes of snow
*Inspired by Ms. Sandra Fowler’s poem ‘Paper Birds’.
Though the paper birds now fly bit slow Messages are soothing as flakes of snow ............................. Lovely verse..
How true my friend we need others to validate our very existence. To share thoughts with likeminded people is a privilege
I am privileged to know that 'Paper Birds' has inspired such a beautiful poem. Your last lines are exceptional. I wish I had written them. Take care. Always your friend at poemhunter, Sandra
I agree with Sandra F the last 2 lines are beautiful....and you're not the only one inspired by her beautiful poem....do read my own titled 'Paper Birds'
A poem certainly from the heart of a life of building bridges with words of wisdom and this poem has just that...soothing like a flake of snow++10 regards
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Yes, one cannot get satisfaction alone unless one shares what one has with others. Poetry, paper bird and snow flakes of messages are good images! Solution for the problem is answered in my poem, A Get Together and hope it will be interesting to you and all readers, I believe!