As stream of consciousness
Changes the course,
Its infinite dimensions arise,
When we rise above this body,
Only then, this truth we can realize.
So, you should know it well,
I am not going to die.
When I depart from the body,
In a new dimension I shall rise.
Call not the people from far away,
Let not there be any hue and cry.
I am immortal, I cannot die;
A simple funeral you should try.
Waste not the time in wailing and waiting,
A peaceful departure I would wish,
My blessings shall be with you, my dear,
You should always in life flourish.
Atman concept. Path of ‘Jnana Yoga’…to reach ‘Enlightenment’ ‘Knowing Thyself’… ‘I’m Thou’ … nicely composed… Sir… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK
I have not been through all you're poems but this one cought my eye but I'm sure you get this all the time Tripp
An enlightening piece. How an ageing soul wishes the world and the people around him to go on, once he is gone? Very nice.
Waste not the time in wailing and waiting, A peaceful departure I would wish, .../// superb writings I wish I wish and wishing becomes blessings o pours on the peaceful mind..........///
Good use of alliterative device. A well expressed poem. Sylva
enjoy Waste not the time in wailing and waiting, A peaceful departure I would wish, My blessings shall be with you, my dear, You should always in life flourish.
A poem of wisdom and depth, with tranquil rhythm and rhyme.
An extremely thoughtful commentary on the last stages of a man's life and after life. You have put it very beautifully. Let us look at the following lines: I am immortal, I cannot die / A simple funeral you should try / A peaceful departure I would wish
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I agree wholeheartedly only worn out bodies die we go on forever