A Wish Poem by C. P. Sharma
A Wish
As stream of consciousness
Changes the course,
Its infinite dimensions arise,
When we rise above this body,
Only then, this truth we can realize.
So, you should know it well,
I am not going to die.
When I depart from the body,
In a new dimension I shall rise.
Call not the people from far away,
Let not there be any hue and cry.
I am immortal, I cannot die;
A simple funeral you should try.
Waste not the time in wailing and waiting,
A peaceful departure I would wish,
My blessings shall be with you, my dear,
You should always in life flourish.
As stream of conscioousness changes course... lovley opening stanza andbeautiful imagination.... well done sir
Excellent thought. C.P, you are really good in conveying a message thru your poem...10++...Brishti Mazumdar
I hate this poem very much, i dont know why but you made me cry CP...I am hating this poem because you have touched my heart so much in this afternoon, i cried for remembering someone very close to me.....BRILLIANCE in composition sir.........sorry for i used the word hate........I love this poem.....10+++++++++
Waste not the time in wailing and waiting, A peaceful departure I would wish, .../// superb writings I wish I wish and wishing becomes blessings o pours on the peaceful mind..........///
Good use of alliterative device. A well expressed poem. Sylva
enjoy Waste not the time in wailing and waiting, A peaceful departure I would wish, My blessings shall be with you, my dear, You should always in life flourish.
A poem of wisdom and depth, with tranquil rhythm and rhyme.
An extremely thoughtful commentary on the last stages of a man's life and after life. You have put it very beautifully. Let us look at the following lines: I am immortal, I cannot die / A simple funeral you should try / A peaceful departure I would wish
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As stream of consciousness Changes the course, Its infinite dimensions arise, ---------- and the way it will go will depend to our deeds