Words Of Silence Poem by Harish k. Thakur

Words Of Silence

Rating: 5.0


A lone strar's fulgent eye
dark midnight's chill
creep into the veins
of frozen words of silence.

Fire splashes the hot waters
the cold unrodented rubber
hides live wires.

Beyond the majestic sea
a grand sea of energy
awaits.

The lone star's inkling
search for its lost image
splintered in the ripples
of the sea mirror.

The lavendered horizon
cups the two
a sonorousvision.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tai Chi Italy 23 June 2008

Every word is beautifully presented here in describing the sheer elequence of the words never spoken. Sonorous vision indeed. I loved the final stanza. Lavender being a favourite colour of mine....smiling at your poetic soul, Tai

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Chitra - 24 June 2008

very rhythmic and a sublte flavor to it makes a nice read

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Kee Thampi 18 May 2015

very nice poem and impressive diction

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Marieta Maglas 30 August 2009

wonderful descriptive poem, very well written..............10

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Mubeen Sadhika 05 August 2009

A nice piece. Good experience to read.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 11 October 2008

a fine composition indeed! as travelling through inner reality. 10++++

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 07 October 2008

A high-calibre poem, sir. Very eloquent. Thank you.

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