Worries Of A Flower! Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

Worries Of A Flower!

Rating: 5.0


Beautiful bees and butterflies,
Roaming around me for my nectar,
In such a drunken stupor,
Stealing away my treasure,
To decide the fate of another flower,
Whether it is going to wilt as a virgin,
Or get pollinated by these urchins.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 11 October 2012

A Cute little poem.and an enjoyable read! ! Bees and butterflies depicted as 'urchins' sounds interesting! !

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Charles Jagongo Ogola 08 October 2012

A wonderful poem and as I also like these lines ' To decide the fate of another flower, Whether it is going to wilt as a virgin, ' Well written keep it up!

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Spiritual Seeker 07 October 2012

Ah...the beautiful cycle of life...to regenarate, sometimes one has to die. Short and sweet observation. A 10.

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Hans Vr 07 October 2012

Yes, what would a flower thing about these guests taking away the nectar

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