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maybe
it would have been better
if you hadn't turned around
but just walked away
and never looked back

maybe
it would have been better
if i hadn't let you in
but i did see you coming
and opened the door

maybe
it would have been better
not to have touched you
but the mind was confused
and couldn't control the flesh

"would it" © 2013 Rob Knetsch

Rob Knetsch

Monday, January 22, 2018

Topic(s) of this poem: confused,control,love,mind

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 22 January 2018

t would have been better if i hadn't let you in but i did see you coming and opened the door Wow, beautiful poem crafted in such delicate manner. Amazed to have read it at a single breath. 10+++ for the sharing. Subhas

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