Writing a Sand Thinking Comments

Its abstract and elusive, it definitely does not suffer from cliches. I like the evasiveness of it. To marks for originality

An experiment in obscurity. I wouldn't waste time attempting to decipher it, unless you are smoking the same substance the author was. (just kidding, there─but not just) Tangential works like this are more for the delivery of the texture of words and syntax, rather than the concrete meaning. Enjoy it for what it sounds like, and the images that may derive. Personally, Robert's image of thinking under the sand while seagulls gaze on in bewilderment is far more visually appealing. I give this poem an 8 by way of inducing Robert's 10+ comment. NB :)

Interesting poem, It is not going to remain permanent, like writing on sand.

Through the few lines of poem a great experience

Relations. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Writing A Sand Thinking.... Nice work..... Thanks for sharing.....

Very interesting. I will have to read this a few more times. Thanks for sharing, Steve.