Writing Our Names Poem by Sanjukta Nag

Writing Our Names

Rating: 5.0


You said, 'Love seems to be
More lighter than the feather
Of a free winged sparrow,
That swirls across the landscape of sun
Painting our names on every pore
Of floating moistures in the wind.'

You said, 'Love feels so deeper
Like the long living roots
Of an African baobab tree,
That move hundred miles inside earth
Inscribing our names on every fragment
Of those soft pebbles in the soil.'

Though love always glitters
More brighter than astral lights
Don't say stardusts will write our names
On those nightly twinkling stars,
'Cause they're constant in staying apart
Which is the most excruciating thing for us.

Sunday, October 18, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 18 October 2015

Of an African baobab tree! To show the strength of life; but, love is the key. Nice work.

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Vishal Sharma 18 October 2015

emotional stuff is always an integral part of your poetry nicely done

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M Asim Nehal 18 October 2015

Awesome poem, Topic itself says about it........LOVED IT.....10++++

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Bharati Nayak 18 October 2015

You marvel in poetic depiction of love.All your poems are so nice, so beautiful! - - - - - - 10

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