Y// The K-Word Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y// The K-Word

Rating: 3.8


music of Kindness
is playing a pleasing piece
pleasing peaceful song

colors of Kindness
are painting masterly art
drawing peace at heart

pleasing heart and mind
Kindness is kindling the soul
spirit filled with peace.

Saturday, October 22, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: art,kindness,love,peace,song
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
3 senryu :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 17 October 2018

i like the alliterations! but, IF i have a soul, i don't care for kindling now. i'll have enough kindling in, thank you very much! bri :)

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Unwritten Soul 23 October 2016

Loved it, Three kindness siblings are in your senryu..loved each of them... Kindness is like a universal primer color..we need it in every complexion...because it is how to make things beautiful

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