Tuesday, November 6, 2007

Yellow Comments

Rating: 5.0

Yellow is
Sharp as lemons
Clear as canary song
Pure as daffodils
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Susan Marie Watkins
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Danny Reynolds 16 January 2008

This piece is one on which, I'm as keen as mustard. Danny; ¬)

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I find this fabulous. t x

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Michael Shepherd 05 January 2008

An effective poem - bright, and loose, and airy.

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Robert Howard 05 January 2008

Beautiful and fascinating. I love the unexpected parings: Sharp as lemons, Clear as a canary song and Glorious as the fear.

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Susan Marie Watkins

Susan Marie Watkins

California, USA
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