Yellow Bird Poem by Vijay Sai R

Yellow Bird

Rating: 3.0


An yellow bird
In rainbow feathers
Pecking strawberry fruit
Smelling jasmine flowers
Beads so bold
Looking here and there
Singing solitary sonnets
Why so pensive
Is your soliloquy?
Scintillating singer you are
Sing your lullabies
We want to rest our souls!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soraka Starchild 12 May 2010

This is a good poem, keep writing :)

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nice poem i liked and for a guy your not a bad writer at all lol but keep writting and i will keep reading :)

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Joseph Vincent Orlanda 23 April 2010

the topic is simple, yet effective...nice poem!

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Michael Brock 21 April 2010

Beautifully written with intense and clear meaning. A good flow, and visual wording, thanks for sharing Michael

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Jodie Pollock 21 April 2010

i like the last line.. sounds like your tired of whatever is happening and want it to end so you can rest.. very emotional and i imagine a very pretty picture.. thank you for sharing.. well done x

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Simply wonderful' beautiful and soulful..................Vijay......................

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Kisaka Mawuza 10 May 2011

wawoo, it's such nice poem, i relate it to the human life on earth for the goodies.

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Marieta Maglas 21 July 2010

A thought -provoking poem. Thnx for sharing.

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Gan Chennai 24 May 2010

Nice Poem, I have enjoyed it in reality. I have recorded these sweet melodious voices in my mobile also together with the Paper Buyer shouting 'Paaaaaaaper, Paiiiiiiiiiiiper'. That is also interesting. Everything natural is so so so wonderful whether it is Bird singing or Paper Buyer shouting. We should know to enjoy. It's all in the Mind. You have it.

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Adnan Khalifeh 19 May 2010

Nice picture...Thank you. Adnan,

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Vijay Sai R

Vijay Sai R

Trichy, South India
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