Vijay Sai

Veteran Poet - 1,538 Points (30 12 1975 / Trichy, South India)

Paradise Lost - Poem by Vijay Sai

I woke, I woke, with moist eyes,
Oh! I don’t know
that would be my last awakening!
I found myself
in a journey of paradise,
rendezvous with pleasure,
For now I noticed that,
I’ve been discarded
this time,
Oh! no! not again,
I flew to nest, yet again,
in this world of unexpecting soberness,
awaiting to strike at which stroke-
and when!
to be a free bird,
lost out of vision in the blue sky-
Yet another dawn after dusk,
blooming with a dream!

Comments about Paradise Lost by Vijay Sai

  • Ankita Bhattacharjee (6/1/2017 11:49:00 AM)

    A beautiful write! It strikes deep while maintaining the flow and beauty of poetry. An impressive writing style, I must say.😊 (Report) Reply

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  • Paul Sebastian (9/24/2015 6:52:00 AM)

    With dawn another awakening, blooming with a dream. A beautiful write, Vijay! The allusion and your writing style is commendable. (Report) Reply

  • (8/31/2014 10:44:00 AM)

    Lovely poem! Nice wording! (Report) Reply

  • Derek Haughton (12/28/2012 6:10:00 AM)

    Went to the trouble of writing a sensible critique but this silly website kept insisting that the verification code was wrong although carefully copied several times. (Report) Reply

  • (12/28/2012 5:37:00 AM)

    Vijay this is a beautiful piece, and you're obviously very talented. Keep writing, as practice makes perfect (Report) Reply

  • Tajudeen Shah (11/29/2012 10:35:00 AM)

    your lost paradise is limited to a dream, and still it is vivaciously fine in its succession. the poetic galore is well-maintained, and deserves much appreciation. the only thing i am not very happy is the limited content. thats ok. may be because, i had great expectation from the title, when you jotted me. wonderful. great to know you, dear Vijay. i just posted a few, if time ever permits, please bless. (Report) Reply

  • (8/6/2012 9:42:00 PM)

    i like it...nice.... keep it up, (Report) Reply

  • (7/21/2012 4:14:00 AM)

    sai you have rising thoughts................keep writing (Report) Reply

  • Rainbow Princess (7/17/2012 10:05:00 AM)

    its beautiful and yeah you have good ideas.i like it.anyway keep it up as writting helps and thanks for inviting me to read your poem (Report) Reply

  • Rainbow Princess (7/17/2012 10:02:00 AM)

    its beautiful i love it! ! for each people its different way.and thanks for inviting me to read your poem (Report) Reply

  • Lasoaphia Quxazs (6/21/2012 1:28:00 PM)

    Good thought. I remember 48 years ago I read a book of Paradise Lost, Paradise Regained. When I finished it with a very little knowledge of English language, I was ready for paradise.
    However, it is our human being that we look for the paradise, but if you check out my poems, until we are in this Earth we never have it. Life is a school room, where we get lessons. If we solve one, we go to the other one. We can arrive to a peace in our soul and true happiness but we still have to solve our every day upcoming problems.
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  • Vincent Kuo (5/28/2012 10:49:00 AM)

    Thank you for this lovely poem, involving vivid imagination! I suppose we all have our paradise where and when we choose to. For many, this abstract concept lies in poetry and the rich introspective consciousness we get to explore as poets...My I invite you to read my poem The Poet which incorporated another type of proverbial paradise I think you may enjoy! (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (5/28/2012 10:27:00 AM)

    A melodramatic modernised manipulation of the title of the Old Classic piece... An arresting poem.... (Report) Reply

  • Alafe Ramat (5/28/2012 7:31:00 AM)

    Nicely penned and quite wonderful, thumps up. (Report) Reply

  • Oludipe Oyin Samuel (5/28/2012 6:34:00 AM)

    Good piece. Striking! (Report) Reply

  • (5/28/2012 2:12:00 AM)

    It's really awesome! ! ! !
    you have done total justice with the vocabulary and verse! ! !
    Appreciable! ! ! ! !
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  • Pen Anthony (5/2/2012 1:44:00 PM)

    nyc piece....i love it and hope your students do too (Report) Reply

  • Claudia Krizay (5/2/2012 5:59:00 AM)

    This is beautiful! I love it- (Report) Reply

  • (5/1/2012 6:21:00 AM)

    This is great! ! Good job :) (Report) Reply

  • (4/21/2012 6:31:00 PM)

    this is lovely poem i love it.i thing already read to ''''john milton paradise lost'''' (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 13, 2009

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