I woke, I woke, with moist eyes,
Oh! I don’t know
that would be my last awakening!
I found myself
in a journey of paradise,
rendezvous with pleasure,
For now I noticed that,
I’ve been discarded
this time,
Oh! no! not again,
I flew to nest, yet again,
in this world of unexpecting soberness,
awaiting to strike at which stroke-
and when!
to be a free bird,
lost out of vision in the blue sky-
Yet another dawn after dusk,
blooming with a dream!
The dream of the unfulfilled dream. With a expectation of accomplishments one would deem appropriate. For leaving to your paradise. A awaking to what you yet must do. For a belief to come through. The meaning that can only be known to you. What is it you seen that made you cry? What is it yet holding you prisoner to this world? Where is the key to these shackles and chains. Is it an escape plan? Or is it just moving on? Cheers to such a wonderful poem. It most certainly gets you thinking.
I really like the poem and the way it ends... This poem is worth nothing less than a 10.. Aditi
amazing title, good transition in the last lines.And it took some effort to understand it (and i still doubt if i fully do) .but i love abstract poems.this is one of them.keep it up.
Yet another dawn after dusk, blooming with a dream! ............. simply wonderful! ! ! ! Kudos to you for writing such a beautiful poem! !
A beautiful write! It strikes deep while maintaining the flow and beauty of poetry. An impressive writing style, I must say.😊
With dawn another awakening, blooming with a dream. A beautiful write, Vijay! The allusion and your writing style is commendable.
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your lost paradise is limited to a dream, and still it is vivaciously fine in its succession. the poetic galore is well-maintained, and deserves much appreciation. the only thing i am not very happy is the limited content. thats ok. may be because, i had great expectation from the title, when you jotted me. wonderful. great to know you, dear Vijay. i just posted a few, if time ever permits, please bless.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It's really awesome! ! ! ! you have done total justice with the vocabulary and verse! ! ! Appreciable! ! ! ! !