Friday, August 30, 2013

Yes, I Believe Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a dilemma
when I started believing
what to do next
if I leave this scarlet
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Neela Nath Das
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Patricia Grantham 01 September 2013

An island to yourself where no vessel can anchor there. This is a are very good line with interesting thoughts. Thanks.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 30 August 2013

Awesome, thought provoking metaphor and many fantastically painted everything fear to boldness keeping at safe place as per the concluding line nice of you Hari 10

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Unwritten Soul 30 August 2013

Hari, this is a very detailed emotional and talking thought...a nice poem hit the meaning very well_Soul

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Lyn Paul 30 August 2013

A superb write creating fear inside. Well done

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Shahzia Batool 30 August 2013

a perfect read...enjoyable for reading delight! ! !

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