Friday, September 5, 2008

Yes Or No Comments

Rating: 5.0

Picking petals one by one
Does he love or not?
A young girl seeks the answer
Under sun that beats down hot
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David Threadgold
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Marilyn Lott 19 January 2009

This reminds me so much of a young girl that plucked off pedals of a daisy when she had a crush on a boy at school. That young girl was me, and this poem made it feel as though it were only yesterday. Thank you, my friend! A '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Roy Storey 17 October 2008

Its a bit like being a kid again buttercups and dasey chines, Thank you.

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Stacey Watts 16 September 2008

Ahh! Young love so very true spinning the dream to make it so.. Wonderful poem.. Such fun.

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