Sunken with sorrow
In a mawkish way,
I used to loiter through the narrow
paths, to exhume my days.
Those were the gone days......
I was not staunch,
Neither loyal.
I used to get thrown away
From almost everywhere.
Those were the gone days......
Envying others was a norm,
For I had no experiences.
Being so coinceited
was yet another reason for that.
Those were the gone days......
But those gone days were teachers.
Now, got rid of the shyness in me;
Now, I'am asked everywhere;
Now, I learned to love others.
Those were the go..
No
This is the reality......
(this is the poem that i wrote during the versification competition-youth festival- in my school.
well, i got third prize!)
nice poem.the way you used short lines and meanwhile conveyed what you wanted to was great.and, even though it is late. congrats for the prize!
It's a nice poem, , , I must say that the reality of life lies between the unknown pearls of birth and death...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
But those gone days were teachers. , , , , , , this i must say was the most beautiful part of the poem, , , , , , the way you wrote your poem was fabulous, , , ,