The Wiper Of My Sorrows Poem by NEETHA SASIDHARAN
The Wiper Of My Sorrows
Brimming with sorrows
In a mawkish way
I loitered through the narrow
path to exhume my day.
Reached an abondoned zone.
A tree stood in its middle.
Something urged me to go on
and I did go in a toddle.
While scripting my worst-evers
in the sandy soil,
A sudden downpour showered
and I gazed through its silver veil.
Rather than staying where I was
Got out of the shade of the tree.
Felt as if a burden has
been taken out of me.
While relishing the rain, I turned around
- My sorrows got washed
away from the soil and I found
That those in my heart too got smashed..
Stood there, feeling proud.
And indeed, I became dumb.
Because, my joy had no bounds
'Good God! You showed me the wiper of my sorrows'
From then on, whenever I feel bad,
rather than meeting a Dr. or going to a temple
I seek the help of rain
- Which will refresh me with its pearl drops....
Neetha, such a beautiful poem! I enjoyed reading it- very moving- take care- Claudia
..as every one else here..i would also say that this was a gem of poetry..just keep writing like this Neethe..your writings will be the wiper of your sorrows... ..your poem acted as the wiper of my sorrows too.. ..keep writing beautifully..
My nickname is Rain....so rain was always special to me...Everything important in my life has it's connection with the beautiful phenomenon....even my first poem...your poem has become close to my heart because it succeeded in capturing the essence of this amazing gift of God...and the rhymes are nice...do write more...regards... :)
Amazing talent...it is unbelievable that u can write with such deep intensity of feelings at an early stage... At least we can see the future of our country if such talents emerge, blooms to be global.......
Wow... u r amazing...... a gem whose brilliance wil be seen soon
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12/3/2024 12:02:23 PM # 1.0.0
Little dreams of revile, Reached an abondoned zone. A tree stood in its middle. Something urged me to go on and I did go in a toddle.