Orlando Belo

Gold Star - 14,975 Points (Derby, England)

You - Poem by Orlando Belo

The first time our fingers ever touched
we shared a contact so heavenly.
You took your heart and all your dreams,
and with a smile passed them to me.

When your beautiful eyes looked into mine,
you added a new sensation to my soul.
I was raised to unbelievable heights,
as if I had surpassed life as a whole.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Comments about You by Orlando Belo

  • (11/15/2015 2:12:00 AM)

    it's so sweet....sound like a story to me (Report) Reply

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  • Unwritten Soul (11/15/2015 1:51:00 AM)

    It really a flavory poem...a romantic flavor, with extra sugar :) love it (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 15, 2015

Poem Edited: Thursday, November 16, 2017

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