You Poem by Lucifera Santez

You

Rating: 5.0


Running hastily in the gardens
How I fell and scraped my knees
Amid those roses and hyacinths
And I used to cry
When it hurt too badly
You would hear it and rush out
Kissing my hurts and drying my tears
Giving me pink cool aids I loved so dearly
You used to carry me in the house
And then you would play
With me for hours and hours
When night came
You would tuck me in my bed
With my bears, birds and mermaids
And you used to tell me stories
Of fairies, sorcerers, centaurs
And lone wolfs
Then I used to slip away in dreams
Thanking god
That he gave me you

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote it when my brother left home for college.i was miserable without him and crying all the time.this poem came from what i feel for my brother.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 16 June 2013

Love and love, Thanking God, He gave m to you. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Sreelekshmi Pillai 18 June 2013

nice poem depicting a brother's love for his little sister..

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Abhishek Mishra 25 September 2013

Lovely poem about brother and sister love..: -)

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Heather Wilkins 21 August 2013

a very close bond between brother and sister. a lovely write

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Heather Wilkins 21 August 2013

a very close bond between brother and sister. a lovely write

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Aldrich Suarez 19 June 2013

wow lol I can see a very close bond between you and your bro...

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Valerie Dohren 18 June 2013

A lovely tribute to your brother, very sweet and poignant.

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