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Heartbreak

Rating: 4.9
If my heart would have been page,
It would burn to ashes right now,
If my love would have been cage,
You would have died from too much affection,
Burning my heart in your hands,
Baby you laughed when you saw my face,
I pleaded and begged,
You said I wasn’t worth your wait,
So why go now and break my heart?
When you had the chance in the very start,
Your one hateful look,
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For one and only, you know i don't have to name you.
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COMMENTS
Virginia Jennings 04 December 2013
Thank you for reading my poem. I loved this..so much emotion. I see a story in my head while I read it. Thank you for sharing!
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Naida Nepascua Supnet 26 November 2013
Ouch, really a heartbreak. Lines are so meant and felt, emotions filled the air. You passed all those to your readers, nice one.
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Khairul Ahsan 26 November 2013
'If my heart would have been page, It would burn to ashes right now, ' Felt the heat of your heart, right at start! 'Why raise them high, feast on my misery, When you knew I couldn’t cope, ' Here, ' feast on my misery' says a lot more than what you've written. 'Didn’t knew you were so cruel, That you enjoyed my heartbreak……….. ' Touched me!
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Benjuzzy Okpuzor 06 October 2013
I love this poem, just like my favourite poem CURSED IS LOVE FOR YOUR SAKE its very touching keep it going boss
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Myla Rose Gigante 06 October 2013
This piece is kinda other version of my new poem ‘Strange Love‘ and also Dislocated Heart‘s poem, ‘Isnt For Me‘... ^_^
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Heather Wilkins 05 October 2013
very touching a sad experience. 10
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Tribhawan Kaul 04 October 2013
It is poignant and touching. Every single line touches the heart.
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Alireza Asgari 03 October 2013
Awesome! It's a very nice expression of a heartbreak feeling.remembered me the experience I had.Lucifera! you killed me! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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Unbreakable Heart 03 October 2013
It touches me so much : (.. anyways this is really good to be broken hearted leads us to fight more and continue believing the power of love!
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Abhishek Mishra 30 September 2013
Sad..but, everything happens for a good reason.Perhaps there is someone more deserving for you: -)
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