You.. Poem by Juliauna (J.jay) Maddux

You..



Living isnt easy
Loving isnt either

I want to go through life with you always and forever
You always seem to boost my confidence, but then i can turn around and be broken back down
For you, I would do anything
For you, I would do everything

Its you,
Your laugh, your smile, your personality, and your eyes...
In only one glance
There is a chance
Of being lost forever

Its you,
You are everything to me
(I want)
(I need)
(I love)
You....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Barbara Terry 16 July 2010

This is very sweet Jay Jay, but if it is about the same guy, I am wondering if you aren't better off with somone else. it is like I said in my comment from last year. There are men (boys) out there with staying power. I have three friends that married their high school sweethearts, and they are still together after 43 years. I know we always think we can change them, and make them respectable, but there are some who won't change, can't change. These are the ones that end up in trouble with themselves, police, or a jealous lover. I do hope that you find someone who has a heart and knows where it belongs. This is the only poem out of 5 that I cannot identify with. But you good in writing it. It is filled with love, and longing, and dreams of a better tomorrow. Thank you for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara

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