Ready Poem by Juliauna (J.jay) Maddux

Ready



Okay, I am ready
I think I am finally steady
I just needed to prepare
So that i could see that you dont care

You dont see that she has you in a trance
Heck, I dont even stand a chance
You dont even care about how bad i am feeling
I guess there is just something you find about her that is much more apealing

You have now become her little pet
And soon I will become someone you will forget
Its now up to her, when we are through
Its up to her, when she breaks up me and you

Forgive me for all that i have said
Forgive me for crying here in my bed

I am truly and utterly inlove with you
But she has decided she wants you too

As the end of us comes near
I begin to feel afraid of my biggest fear.
-Losing the love of my life,
Wasting all that strife

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Barbara Terry 11 July 2009

Hi JayJay and you know what? If he is that weak minded to allow another woman to come between the two of you, then you are definitely better off without him. There are men out there that have staying power, and while like all men they will look, they won't touch or allow another woman to come between him and his love for whoever. This man however is tempted by the devil's advocate (the other woman) and has succumbed to her 'irresistable'? charm. So it doesn't do to pine for someone that feels the grass is greener on the other side of the fence. If I were you, I'd spit in his face, and tell him that they both deserve each other because all sankes do. But that is just me. Also the knife, pills, poison, drowning, hanging, or even using a gun on yourself is not the answer. We don't get sad; we don't get mad; WE GET EVEN! If he has succumbed to her 'irresistable'? charm, then you go out and find someone that he will be jealous of also, and sad that he didn't stay with you while he had the chance. This is a very emotional write, but pining away for someone who doesn't care just isn't worth it. Go out and find someone new, and let him see what he passed up. A10+++++. Love & hugs, Barbara

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