indira babbellapati

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You And I - Poem by indira babbellapati

you and i
mere illusions
created through
this body to test our
strength and resolve to
loosen this grip on the earth

you and i
mere shadows
of a great light playing
an eternal hide and seek

22dec2009
11.42hrs


Comments about You And I by indira babbellapati

  • (1/1/2010 1:01:00 AM)


    Hmm…concept of Capital ‘Y’ of You [Thou] and small ‘i’ …of me
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    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
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  • (12/24/2009 7:14:00 AM)


    Thats a good one. small and cute one (Report) Reply

  • (12/23/2009 1:17:00 AM)


    ah.. illusions eh.. we are indeed small.. in comparison to all. i like the poem (Report) Reply

  • (12/22/2009 10:56:00 AM)


    An illusion that sustains mankind! (Report) Reply

  • Varanasi Ramabrahmam (12/22/2009 6:27:00 AM)


    A beautiful philosophic poem. Truth carved through verse pleasantly. The 'you' and 'i' though are mortals and shadows are instruments of the Light for its absorption, scattering and spread. I liked the idea of the poem so much. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 22, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 3, 2010


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