You Are Dancing Poem by Nikunj Sharma

You Are Dancing

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When the adrenalin creeps;
And the knees don’t creek.
They say you are dancing.

When your heart skips a beat;
And wanna tap your feet.
They say you are dancing.

When the night is young;
And your heart bears;
Some tunes unsung.
They say you are dancing.

It’s not a state of being;
But a state of mind.
When you leave all your worries;
Some distance behind.
They say you are dancing.

When the lights go dim;
But not a soul is grim.
When music going down;
Is unable to make you frown.
When you walk in setting sun;
Still having fun.
When the end seems close;
Yet in your nerves;
Blood flows.
They say you are dancing.





When you come back from the brink;
To have another drink;
From the cup of life.
Forgetting all swoon;
Deleting all strife.
When the kite soars high;
In the blue sky;
When you think;
You can.
In yourself see a real man;
They say you are dancing.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elsa Bennett 19 June 2009

Truly wonderful poem! Excellent ideas in it... Thankyou.

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Wonderful poem about dancing. 'When the night is young and tunes are unsung' just makes me want to dance. And as you say, there is the adrenalin and letting go of worries and people smiling. You have captured the spirit of the dance so well Nikunj. Well done!

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Ken E Hall 27 June 2009

A nice twist to the dancing swing, , , you have joined the mind with relaxation of dance acca adrenalin, perfect.Being a dancer I feel your poem++++10 regards uavanice1

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rarely do i read about this, it was fun reading.. i like it as i also love to dance.. :) nice one.. :)

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Christina Phan 25 June 2009

Yea its all true I luv to dance its fun another great one 10+

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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 June 2009

'When the kite soars high; In the blue sky; When you think; You can. In yourself see a real man; They say you are dancing.' Marvelous write, love with 10+

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