@ ## Beyond ### @ Poem by Nikunj Sharma

@ ## Beyond ### @

Rating: 3.7


I often sit alone and think,
brood over and speak to myself.
These small moments lift silence
within the self, do help.I stay.

One moment when stretched
seems infinite, its depth intrigues
charms, amuses, lifts the spirits
instantly, My fingers tap; I hum.

I don't speak; not that I want
to. I hold this moment within
the breath that teeters on
the mind's edge, I observe.

Closed eyes, warm
palms on my face
disturbed. beats now dance
with grace, I travel.

Limited, known measures
cant calibrate, the unknown yet
sought after distances.In
dignity, I walk again.


17th November 2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Meggie Gultiano 25 November 2009

so beautiful and relaxing

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Vinod Kumar 25 November 2009

Nice poem attempting to understanding the sixth sence and rejuvanating the kundaleni, it is beyond the scoring of internal energy, thanks for sharing,10.

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 25 November 2009

You should know that what you write isn't worth enuf a comment..'coz the feelings and art of a poet can never be justified simply by that. I like the way you feel: -)

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Ravi Sathasivam 26 November 2009

Excellent poem and well composed Simple but meaningful. Enjoyed reading it Thanks

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Indira Babbellapati 26 November 2009

it's that experience beyond that nudges one towards self-expression...u captured that state...

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Jasbir Chatterjee 25 February 2010

Lovely poem! Yes, silence sometimes feels so nourishing, so reassuring..moments can be stretched into the infinite, unfathomed distances can be crossed in seconds, and impossible becomes possible!

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 29 December 2009

well, this is well composed. nice job!

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george george 20 December 2009

I stay, I hum, I observe, I travel, I walk. Each aptly described in a lilting verse. Well done!

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Ritty Patnaik 18 December 2009

dear nikunj.....the feeling to hold on infinity in a moments flash of truth.these moments are precious and special.loved the poem! you write so well. ritty

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Robbie Squires 14 December 2009

just simpily great. fantastic job

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