You are my drunkenness...
I did not sober up, as if I can do that;
I don't want to anyway.
I have a headache, my knees are full of scars
I am in mud all around
I struggle to walk towards your hesitant light.
You are my drunkenness... I did not sober up, as if I can do that; romance and desire and passion. tony
You are my drunkenness... I did not sober up, as if I can do that; I don't want to anyway. passion and infatuation. tony
This is a great philosophical poem having a nice theme behind it..
Bearing pain in heart you are looking for peace and happiness. 'I am in mud all around I struggle to walk towards your hesitant light.'.. is very aptly said. Congrats.
light is light full inside but hesitancy makes it maze of life
I have a headache, my knees are full of scars I am in mud all around I struggle to walk towards your hesitant light. You are my drunkenness. tony
Hesitant light is thought provoking.... An excellent modern poem of the day!
I found this poem chosen modern poem second time as the poem of the day. Congratulations.
hesitant light- the darkness! march since the genesis as the sage towards the light!