sagar patil.

Rookie - 2 Points (03/06/1990 / maharashtra, india)

You Are My Night... - Poem by sagar patil.

you are my night, my dawn
you are my day
you are god, my universe...
you are my world
to me, you are my time
& i am every moment for you
how on earth can u ever
live apart from me?

your eyes is misty..
your face is mirror
of your heart
you are a beautiful sad story
what cause agony to your heart...
tell me
why are you so angry
with your self?

not just my eyes
you are etched on my heart
you are the reason why i live

your laughter...
your charms
are so different from the other...

you are my night, my dawn
you are my day
you are god, my universe...
you are my world


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Comments about You Are My Night... by sagar patil.

  • Alexandria Angel (8/30/2012 11:15:00 AM)


    Awww it really shows who much ur in love :) (Report) Reply

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  • (8/26/2012 4:32:00 AM)


    You are very spontaneous in thoughts i guess..Well its a good thing, and that is clearly visible through your creations....Class apart! (Report) Reply

  • (8/25/2012 1:20:00 PM)


    Words have flowed straight from the heart. (Report) Reply

  • (8/25/2012 10:30:00 AM)


    Wooow!
    Simply osum....
    All the best..
    (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (8/24/2012 11:12:00 AM)


    Very earnest. Loved this piece too. (Report) Reply

  • Poetheart Morgan (8/24/2012 7:37:00 AM)


    I love this kind of poem. Love forever! Do not miss! Love is always worth it (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 24, 2012



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