Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 399,394 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

You Are On Eternal Chariot - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

I am riding the mortal car
I have to leave this one day
I know there is change ever
This change is for rebirth.

You travel in this universe
By creating of your own way
Creating this world you sing
I know you travel in a medium.

You are father you are Lord
You are on eternal chariot
Entire universe sustains on
You are point but ocean sure.

Riding this chariot you come
To take all of us, we too go
With you being pure we travel
On eternal chariot you smile.

Topic(s) of this poem: spiritual


Comments about You Are On Eternal Chariot by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • (2/26/2019 11:00:00 PM)

    God is in eternal Chariot. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you area nice poet. (Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (7/18/2016 1:55:00 PM)

    Is for rebirth! ! Nice work. (Report)Reply

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  • (7/8/2016 6:37:00 AM)

    Awesome metaphor A Car for life is amusing, indeed we have rented our body for our soul to drive our life in this world.10+++++ (Report)Reply

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  • Rajnish Manga (7/6/2016 12:12:00 PM)

    Thanks for sharing this great philosophical poem involving our physical and metaphysical phases of life. Great expression. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 6, 2016

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 26, 2019


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