sagar patil.

Rookie - 2 Points (03/06/1990 / maharashtra, india)

You Are Reality... - Poem by sagar patil.

you are reality, as well as dream
you are a river
as well as thirst
you are restlessness of heart
as well as peace

wherever i go
i got you there
no matter you are with me
or not but you are
in front of me
you r my companion you are with me
at my every step you are my love...
come & let me take in my arms..
& make you more close 2 my self
when you are away me
i feel like,
passing moment bcome awkward...

in the whole world
there is not or nor will be
anybody as lucky as me you
have given me ur heart
i am the closest 2 you

i dont ever ever realize
when the time passes
there is no realization on me
since i meet u...

oh god!
the shade of ur i eyelashes is very beautiful
now i have no fear of sunlight
bcoz i have them spread on me
i cant breath without u
i cant live without u
i have no peace even for a
single moment without you...

Poet's Notes about The Poem

i m in love...

Comments about You Are Reality... by sagar patil.

  • Poetheart Morgan (8/24/2012 7:43:00 AM)

    but what love is this?
    cause envy
    cause pain!
    fight for your love!
    superbe! ! ! !
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  • (8/24/2012 6:24:00 AM)

    Simply written with simple gestures.....
    thank you for the new style......
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  • Unwritten Soul (8/23/2012 9:22:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem, so i am really understand why it so beautiful...sweet write, thanks for your invite...
    but i remember one poet told me if we not use r to replace are,2 as to...the poem will be better :)
    such a good write keep it up_Unwritten Soul
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  • Neela Nath Das (8/23/2012 8:49:00 AM)

    Hmm, Sagar.Very nice poem, utterly wrapped with romantic air. Loved it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 22, 2012

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