You Are The Song Poem by angelianne 1012

You Are The Song

Rating: 4.5


if i could i'll write you a song,
that takes you to where you belong.
but the lyrics somehow went wrong,
writing it is taking me so long.

i tried to match the words and the melody,
but all i can think of is this horrid enmity.
the notes that used to be perfect are slowly fading
for my heart knows that something is missing.

i tried to create a happy harmony,
but my soul only knows a song of melancholy.
i put into words all of our memory,
but i was filled by all of my worries.

i can still taste the sweetness of your lips
the warmth of you hands to my skin is what i missed
your eyes as blue as the sky and calm sea
how could i not love a special man as thee?

to be with you is what i'm praying everyday
my love for you dear is here to stay
now i know that i've been blinded all along
i dont need to write anymore cos in my heart YOU ARE THE SONG...

Copyright 2008 © angelianne1012

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 27 August 2008

words and melody mismatching...that could be the sole enmity there...nothig other is visible in the poem..he, as a song, remains solid in your mind... how could another song come in? therefore enmity and mismatch quite natural...a very good write, Angel...10

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Ency Bearis 25 July 2008

nicely written and it is a song...good work Best Wishes, Ency Bearis

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Michaela Tatualla 25 July 2008

A lovable composition! ! ! Really sweet...Keep it up.....thanks!

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Andre Lopez 18 June 2008

a good, delighfull and easy read

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Will P. Litter 30 April 2008

This is sweet, I enjoyed reading.

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