you've been suffering for so long
finding somewhere to belong
mourning for the lost love
looking for some happiness you cant find.
you've been searching for the light,
but u were created without a sight.
it made me wonder why sometimes u cry,
is it because of the pain you keep inside?
you are meant to feel
but its so hard for you to heal.
you dont have your own mind to believe,
but you can have some reason to grieve.
heart of mine, dont give up
you've been through so much.
heart of mine, rest for a while
i know one day you will once again smile.
heart of mine, hang in there
for the pain will soon be over.
heart of mine, dont throw your dreams away
someone will come to mend you someday.
Copyright 2008 © angelianne1012
you have done it you wrote the words my heart long to hear in this difacult time im going througth it was hard for me to keep a dry eye, going in my favs. (bless you ANGELIANNE)
angelianne...... great poem and great feelings...... but only u can make ur heart happy..... love urself....
This poem has more strength than the last. It also has a creative element which is important. It is almost a 10, but not quite. I found nothing here that resonates over time. great poetry, must do that. GW62
mourning for the lost love heart of mine, dont give up you've been through so much. heart of mine, rest for a while i know one day you will once again smile. A poem of hope which renders courage to the reader who goes through such a situation as you describe. A very fine poem describing the realities of life. Thank you dear poetess. tony
you are meant to feel but its so hard for you to heal., , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , good poem, , , , , , , , , , thanks
Heartfelt anne, it is so powerful, intense and a brave one can write like this. I like the finish it is so touching. Rema
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A true and beautifully composed piece, your expression of words..sooths the reader.....Great poem. Stay strong! ! Thanks for sharing with us...10/10 best wishes Jon