Thursday, October 23, 2008

You Are The Sun (C) 10-23-08 Comments

Rating: 4.3

You are the sun came from the mouth of Shakespeare
And it’s obvious that he’s never seen you
Because your beauty is multisensory from eyes to ear
And he would’ve known the sun has nothing on you and it’s true
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Zahir Kijani
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Clarissa Dee 14 April 2010

I love your similes and metaphors. This seems like a slightly childish poem but it has deep meaning. Amazing!

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Luna Conley 06 December 2009

This is wonderful, Corey, great job. I really enjoy the plays on Shakespeare. Thank you. -Luna

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Angelica Ortiz 14 April 2009

you have your own individuality, it what makes your poems. Great write! i enjoyed this one

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