You As Me Poem by ERNEST CLARY

You As Me

Rating: 5.0


If I were you
and you were me
your eyes I would look through
and mine I would see

if you were to talk I could hear
the sound of my voice
with your ear

on my feet you would stand
you could touch me
with my hand

through my eyes you could see
what its like
to be me

then the things that I do
wouldnt be me
it would be you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 14 January 2009

wonderful poem...nice concept...10

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it would be amazing to see ourselves through the eyes of another, very imaginative, a 10 indeed great piece :)

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Fiona Davidson 14 January 2009

Nice piece Ernest...enjoyed reading it...thank you...

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ERNEST CLARY

ERNEST CLARY

St.Charles Missouri
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